
I've chosen a few key words to use in my essay (conjuncts and idiomatic expressions). To gain more exercise, I've written a new essay on mugging. Here it is.
MUGGING
"
In recent years, mugging in the underground has become a
burning problem.
On account of the polluted towns, a great number of people
are dependent on public transport.
For that reason,
they are used to going by Tube most days of the week.
In my opinion, the politicians should
take this problem seriously. This is what happened to me one day when going to work:
I was sitting in an overcrowded wagon. Suddenly two boys, about fifteen years old, began to attack a group of fellow passengers. There was no ticket collector in the wagon, so we were just watching the scene,
feeling sorry for the people who were abused, but not knowing how
to get rid of the bullies.
Under the circumstances, there was very little we could do to
solve the problem.
It is a pity that people who
rely on public transport, should risk being terrorized by hooligans on their daily journey to work. I know I should
have great confidence in the authorities. I
am disappointed in them. They should not
be suspected of negligence, and the public should have the right
to look forward to going to work without being mugged by young criminals.
The two youngest actually seized the purse of an old lady sitting there quite helpless.
For the sake of defenceless passengers, the authorities should try to solve this serious problem
in the near future. They should not
be suspected of ignoring the serious problem of mugging.
I agree with those who demand that politicians
give priority to this
current issue."